Of the two blog posts that made the front page of Hacker News one converted 20x more users to sign-up for MeetingBurner’s Free Online Meeting & Webinar service. And in all fairness to MeetingBurner, this blog post is hacked from the source during the week of the book launch for The Webinar Way because there is a chapter in the book entitled “HOT OPTION” all about MeetingBurner.
The two articles in question (direct from MeetingBurner) are:
- Why we’re building a boring business (and you should too) . . .
- I hired my friends and family, and I’d do it again . . .
And here’s how each performed:
|Boring business post|
So why did one preform 20x better than the other?
First – Tell visitors exactly who you are, and ask them to sign-up in your first paragraph . . .
More of your visitors will read your first paragraph than any other part of your posts – so make sure to tell them what you do and hit them with a call to action!
- In our “I hired my friends & family” post we make no mention of what MeetingBurner is.
- In our “boring business” post we have a link to the MeetingBurner signup page, and then use a quote to illustrate that we’re working in the online meeting space [webinars].
- And in THIS post I’ve tried to apply this lesson by hitting you over the head in the first sentence with this line “signup for MeetingBurner’s Free Online Meeting & Webinar service”!
So don’t miss that opportunity to center the visitor and give them a call to action.
Second – Link like crazy and weave in your CALL TO ACTION . . .
The more links you put in your story, the more people will click them – simple right?
- In our “I hired my friends & family” post we have ZERO links back to MeetingBurner.com.
- In our “boring business” post we have FOUR links, several with call to action text like “just click here to receive instant access to MeetingBurner . . .”
- And in THIS post yet I’ve gone overboard, so why not throw one more in here – Please sign up right now to get your Free MeetingBurner Account!
Third – Keep it short and sweet . . .
My favorite quote is attributed to Mark Twain (and others) – “If I’d had more time I would have written a shorter letter”. High quality content in a distilled format wins.
- In our “I hired my friends & family” post we ran 1,359 words.
- In our “boring business” post there are 560 words.
- And in THIS post there are 614 words.
Fourth – Include a P.S. (that has a call to action in it!) . . .
As copywriter Michael Fortin says using a PS is “like the second headline” – meaning this is your second opportunity to make your case and provide users with a call to action – especially page scanners that
- In our “I hired my friends & family” post we did not use a PS or a call to action to close the article.
- In our “boring business” we ended with a P.S. and a strong call to action.
- And in this post. . . get ready for it.
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